The
Park Area
This picture is a located in Rayong. There was a big yard
and a tall old orange tree. A new white garden chair was near the orange
tree. A pool was full of fish. Some
children were playing in the smooth yard. My friend was on
the path, there were cherries falling
there. She tasted some delicious fresh cherries. I saw a man driving a bus. Then the
bus came down the road and crashed the
pool. A very loud horn beeped by the
man. I smelt a badly smoke car and saw the
injured man taken into the ambulance.

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