A Cold Day
One cold day, snow is
starting to fall. Then, leaves covered by the snow. It was cold,
miserable and wet. The interesting things happened on
this day. I walked around the corner of the school building. There was snow
about a foot deep
covering the whole playground. The area had changed by the snow.
It was the most
beautiful thing, it was as white as a cloud, laying soft and fluffy like a big ball tinged gold by
the morning sun.
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